Treatment
Title: Lockers, Jocks and 1 Smoking CheerLeader
Duration: 5 Minutes
Main Characters:
Paddy (Jock, Gang Leader)
Ronan (Best Friend, Gang member)
Max (Gang member)
Micky (Gang member)
Alex (Nerd)
Maura (Girlfriend)
? (Teacher)
Synopsis: The Jock (Paddy, captain of the school football team) is the most popular kid in the school with his own troublesome gang. But when he is told he is failing his exams, fate leads him to a nerd whose name is shauna, who offers to help him out after the Jock supposedly helping out her brother.
Soundtrack/Score: In development!
SFX: School Bell, In development!
Duration: 5 Minutes
Main Characters:
Paddy (Jock, Gang Leader)
Ronan (Best Friend, Gang member)
Max (Gang member)
Micky (Gang member)
Alex (Nerd)
Maura (Girlfriend)
? (Teacher)
Synopsis: The Jock (Paddy, captain of the school football team) is the most popular kid in the school with his own troublesome gang. But when he is told he is failing his exams, fate leads him to a nerd whose name is shauna, who offers to help him out after the Jock supposedly helping out her brother.
Soundtrack/Score: In development!
SFX: School Bell, In development!
posted by Paul at
05:14
2 Comments:
Hi Paul, good to see you've made a start, a few things I want you to think about , 1. the title - doesn't leave a lot to the imagination and 2. is where is the story set? Is it supposed to be an American high school? Would a story such as this happen at a school like ours?
Got it sorted the title was only temp, got it fixed and explained the story in class.
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